Reply to: Bye Bye Russell

[SimonMac]

You won't have to do that, believe me.

Ah much better.

[russell]

I love the film, proper turn the brain off action









Oh tulip I am starting to bond with Russell.









Your a knut Russell, I hope your knob turns green and falls off!









Ah that feels better

You won't have to do that, believe me.

Ah much better.

[SimonMac]

Thought I heard that before. Might watch Con Air again for a laugh.

I love the film, proper turn the brain off action









Oh tulip I am starting to bond with Russell.









Your a knut Russell, I hope your knob turns green and falls off!









Ah that feels better

[russell]

You are Garland Greene and I claim my 5 straight jackets

Thought I heard that before. Might watch Con Air again for a laugh.

[SimonMac]

Ignore him for he's a font of misplaced rage. Name your cliché; Mother held him too much or not enough, last picked at kickball, late night sneaky uncle, whatever. Now he's so angry moments of levity actually cause him pain; gives him headaches. Happiness, for that gentleman, hurts.

As I said just ignore him...

You are Garland Greene and I claim my 5 straight jackets

[suityou01]

There's a shock, it was a sub 24hr flounce rather than a graceful retirement having at least achieved suitable reputation.

I know these me me me types, it's truly shocking.

[MarillionFan]

Your scansion is atrocious
Seriously people, if you're trying to write verse, at least read it aloud before publishing it and see if it flows. You don't have to restrict yourself to trochees and spondees, but it shouldn't be stilted and stumbling, particularly if you attempt to cast it into a rhythmical structure. Furthermore, sticking words in that add nothing to the sense in the vague hope that they fix the scansion when they actually don't just makes it worse.

Your scansion shows a lack of skill,
Your verses' structure makes me ill;
Before you rhyme, please take the time
To learn what makes a pleasingrhyme.

This post shows a lack of class.
Nicholas Fitzsimons you can kiss my

[NickFitz]

doggerel

Your scansion is atrocious

Seriously people, if you're trying to write verse, at least read it aloud before publishing it and see if it flows. You don't have to restrict yourself to trochees and spondees, but it shouldn't be stilted and stumbling, particularly if you attempt to cast it into a rhythmical structure. Furthermore, sticking words in that add nothing to the sense in the vague hope that they fix the scansion when they actually don't just makes it worse.

Your scansion shows a lack of skill,
Your verses' structure makes me ill;
Before you rhyme, please take the time
To learn what makes a pleasing rhyme.

[MarillionFan]

Ignore him for he's a font of misplaced rage. Name your cliché; Mother held him too much or not enough, last picked at kickball, late night sneaky uncle, whatever. Now he's so angry moments of levity actually cause him pain; gives him headaches. Happiness, for that gentleman, hurts.

As I said just ignore him...

Sorry Russ. Wrong login.

WIS.

[AtW]

You have a lot of hate in you, maybe you should see a counsellor or psychologist?

Ignore him for he's a font of misplaced rage. Name your cliché; Mother held him too much or not enough, last picked at kickball, late night sneaky uncle, whatever. Now he's so angry moments of levity actually cause him pain; gives him headaches. Happiness, for that gentleman, hurts.

As I said just ignore him...

[russell]

There's a shock, it was a sub 24hr flounce rather than a graceful retirement having at least achieved suitable reputation.

You have a lot of hate in you, maybe you should see a counsellor or psychologist?

[AtW]

There's a shock, it was a sub 24hr flounce rather than a graceful retirement having at least achieved suitable reputation.

Well, if you think it's so easy why won't you try to flounce for a month or two?

CUK forum addition is a recognised IT person condition!

[TykeMerc]

There's a shock, it was a sub 24hr flounce rather than a graceful retirement having at least achieved suitable reputation.

[NotAllThere]

As you wish.



Happy now?

That's just you pissing in the snow.

[AtW]

As you wish.



Happy now?

Yes.

Be tomorrow morning at 9am sharpish at Unit 1 Fukushima Plant for your new contract assignment.