A vision of the future

**Spacecadet** · 12 March 2008, 11:43

Badly written and tedious.. good find!

**bogeyman** · 12 March 2008, 12:36

Originally posted by Spacecadet View Post

Badly written and tedious.. good find!

Not arf!

Where's that from?

Prolix 'r' Us?

**BlasterBates** · 12 March 2008, 13:55

Badly written ....well maybe ....but....

**Marina** · 12 March 2008, 14:43

Originally posted by Spacecadet View Post

Badly written and tedious.. good find!

The style is a bit ponderous, sounding like German translated a bit too literally. But I wouldn't say tedious, and despite the grim theme there are some comic touches like "The credit toaster burned-up and the bread is burnt dollars".

A vision of the future