Received a few these past 2 weeks and the structure and some specific sentences (highlighted bits below) are suspiciously same-sounding. I don't mind the fact that the tone's friendly, but a bit more effort chaps don't just cut-and-paste!
Dear Xxxx
Firstly I would like to introduce myself.
Previously I have specialised in Xxxx and currently I’m specialising in Xxx, which l will continue to work solely in for many more years.
the business contacts I have at my disposal are second to none. For this reason I am keen to build good relationships with higher calibre candidates in this market such as yourself.
If we can spend 5 – 10 minutes upfront now, ideally face to face, (im happy to buy the coffees or beers, either one is fine by me!) then it will.....
Dear Xxxx
Firstly I would like to introduce myself.
Previously I have specialised in Xxxx and currently I’m specialising in Xxx, which l will continue to work solely in for many more years.
the business contacts I have at my disposal are second to none. For this reason I am keen to build good relationships with higher calibre candidates in this market such as yourself.
If we can spend 5 – 10 minutes upfront now, ideally face to face, (im happy to buy the coffees or beers, either one is fine by me!) then it will.....


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