20+ pages and no Fifty Shades of Grey yet. Come on, own up.
That's a girls book, Shirley?
I've never felt so knackered.
And Constance Briscoe thought that the book lacked character development.
Duh!
It's SF, you idiot. SF doesn't do character development.
Oh Dear # 2.
Well most SF is crap. Like most books of any genre. A good story is a good story in any universe.Most SF is for autistic dweebs. Any normal person finds most SF uni-dimensional and unsatisfying.
That's because imagining alternate physical realities is easy, imaging alternate personalities is hard.